I don’t usually participate in prompts because of time restrictions but when I saw David’s W3 Poetry Prompt and poem Oh Luna, that Steven S. Wallace wrote, I couldn’t help myself, since I had just written a poem to my husband about Sun and Shade and it reminded me of that. And it was such a fun whimsical poem, I couldn’t resist.
Click on the link Oh Sol below below if you want to participate, there’s still time if you act fast!
Oh Sol,
365 days you orbit
So bright & shine me on
Always together not one or the other.
Oh Sol,
2 lights yes
We run this town
I like my powder dark with a marshmallow
To top us off as we spin in circles at sundown.
Oh Sol,
Burn baby burn so bright
You are the candle in my white light
Your penpal, my one true love
Iโm strumming our tune dear
Can you hear it
Oh Sol,
Iโm blushing tis true
You beam me up once in a blue moon.
You see
Iโm always spinning round you or you me.
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I think you deserve to be beamed up more often than just once in a blue moon, Cindy!
<3
David
oh that’s sweet David thanks and I do too since i figured out how to link and submit and I actually did a prompt in a blue moon! ๐๐๐๐โจ
Thank you, Cindy, for both poems!
Joanna
You’re so welcome Joana. Saving your post to read later when I have the proper time it deserves! ๐๐
The sole Sol brightens our souls. Nice prompt action.
I like then.. you should play and add that.. love it Tim. ๐๐๐
Lovely ๐ค
Thanks so much! ๐
Cute – you must think poetry 24/7. I’m amazed at all the topics. ๐
I thought it was fun Marsha! ๐๐ lol.. it just pops up and out which is fun!! ๐ thanks ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Amazing!
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Yes I dig it big! I love how it replies! Luna is the subject of cajoling or seduction by a sort of cad of a Sun. Your Moon reply is just straight honest admiring to Sol. Letโs hope Sol deserves that pure love and admiration that she sends to him!๐. For the sake of Solโs everywhere!
Lovely poem!!!๐๐ฅฐโSSW
Awww and thanks to dear Luna of course who deserves the credit of course.. yesโฆ letโs see if the stars align or collide dear Steve.
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Wow, an incredible piece. It sounds like you were riding a rush of inspiration. ^_^
Thanks so much!!
Thatโs a great way to say it and it felt like I just jumped in the wave of fun!!!
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Yay! Thank you for taking all of us along for the ride. ^_^
of course and thanks for riding with us! ๐๐๐๐๐๐You should write one too.. sometime! ๐
Hehe. It was a pleasure, and I’ll definitely think about it. Looks like fun. ^_^
๐so much fun when you have the time-:)
Which I donโt really ๐๐
Amazing poem, Cindy. Just beautiful. Love it.๐๐๐๐๐
Oh thanks a lot Grace!!
Iโm so Hailey to hear that. It was fun!
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Welcome, dear Cindy.๐๐๐
Beautiful.
Thanks Selma!!๐๐
This is a beautiful poem, dear Cindy. Loved reading it.
Awww thanks much Aparna!!
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Beautifully written Cindy
Thanks so much Sadje!!๐๐
Youโre most welcome my friend
๐๐ so much appreciated Sadje! ๐
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Hugs and love on Sunday! ๐
Much appreciated dear friend
Beautiful poem Cindy! The concept of sun is really cool
Thanks Sheereen!!! It so is … like now I’m going to bed and you’re wide awake! ๐๐๐ have a good day.๐๐๐๐
Good night
NN my friend!!! have a great day!!! xo ๐๐๐๐
This is lovely Cindy. Fun, whimsical and very cool. ๐ฅฐ
Hey Miriam… so glad you’re enjoying the sun and the moon for sure which is where you always aew!!๐๐๐ Thanks!
Not much sun here at the moment but Iโm sure itโll come out again! ๐
Iโm sending you some to warm you up. Happy Sunday Sun Day!! ๐๐ฅฐ
Aww, thank you! ๐
This is such a stunning poem, dear Cindy! I loved this with all my heart. Truly amazing! Your writings always fascinates me with their eloquence๐๐
Awww aren’t you sweet Jan… That’s so sweet of you. I’m so touched and really appreciate you! Thanks so much!! ๐๐๐๐๐
A beautiful love poem, Cindy. Itโs lovely! โค๏ธ
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Happy to hear and always appreciate your solar support in sun and moon times ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Lovely Solar Poem Dear
Cindy Lighting Up All Our
Nights Reflecting Days to Come
It’s True the One Shine We
Will All Count On At Least
In California
Where It
Rarely
Rains And
Shines So Much
Just Dreaming Away New Now
Freedom’s Dance And Song Breathing…:)
Thanks so much Fred! You have that right but please when you’re dancing tomorrow, we need a rain dance tomorrow in Callie if you could be so kind and comply! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Hehe Oh Yes iโve
Been Known to
Provide A Rain
Dance Wherever
i Go Dear Cindy Itโs
Raining Men A Fred-
Sweat Storm i Naturally
Bring
Cat-6
Fredercaine
Oh How i Make
the Flowers ๐บ Bloom
With SMiles Seriously
Got Pics That Prove it
Hehe Yep
This Mobile
Hurricane ๐
Has A Long
Shelf Life indeed
Keep California
Dreaming For Rain
Hehe Perhaps one
Day Rainman Will
Visit
There
Too Hehe
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Burn baby burn!! You’re the greatest, Cindy G! Love your optimism, your zest for life and your sunny smile. You have a way of lighting up people’s lives without even trying and making everyone feel better! You’re a real keeper, my friend. So glad to have you lighting up my little corner of the world!
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So cute and lovely take, Cindy! Enjoyed reading it. Beautifully written ๐๐๐
Awww thanks dearest KK!
Glad you enjoyed it!
It was fun to do! ๐๐
You’re always welcome, Cindy ๐๐๐
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This is delightful, Cindy! I think your poem would be a great song. โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Eugi! How much fun would that be. ๐๐
My pleasure, Cindy! ๐๐ต ๐ถ
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My head is spinning, Cindy! Wonderful take on earth’s heavenly bodies! <3 Enjoy your week!
Hahahahaha Cheryl!!!
Thanks a lot!
I will and you do the same. Happy Sunday! ๐๐
Awww. What a wonderful love poem, Cindy. I love it. I love the rhyme of the last two lines. It feels like the perfect end to a song.
Thanks so much Diana! So glad you enjoyed it. It was fun for sure and someone else mentioned a song. Maybe I’ll have to ask Charley if he likes it enough to turn it into one. ๐๐๐๐
๐ That would be fun!
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Oh how delightful Cindy dawwwwlinkkkkk!!! What a burst of energy, fun, and life, illuminating from the sun! Yeah baby, burn brightly!!! ๐๐๐ What a SUNalicious poem! ๐ฅฐ๐๐
Thanks my SuNDaylicious friend. I’m happy you liked it too and i really drew off Steve’s poem so he made it easy. Don’t you love people that make you look like a rock star ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ hahahaha. But 4 times a week to post is crazy for me!! Have a great day Dawwwwlink! ๐
You are so welcome my little Energizer Bunny! You are a rock star, my Poetic Mommy Nature! Here’s to a FANtabulous week ahead for you my dear. ๐ธ๐ฅ๐น Hugs and smooches! ๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ
Awww and to you my Dawwwwlink Kym. You as well I will and i’ll see you manana! ๐๐๐๐
You got it my lady! Smooches! ๐ฅฐ๐๐
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What a delightful poem to read dear Cindy, so glad you took up on this prompt. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Thanks so much Daphny, glad to hear you like it. I’m glad too and I wish I had more time for things like these… someday maybe!
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You’re most welcome, Cindy! Yeah someday sounds good. ๐โค๏ธ
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Absolutely incredible poem, as always I loved it!
Thanks sooo much Pooja! Happy to hear that!
You should try the next one. ๐
I’ll look out for the next prompt!
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Most beautiful poem on sweet love.are you missing somebody,dear cindy!!๐๐๐
Aruna … Thanks my darling friend. “Dear Luna” made it easy!
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If we want,every thing is easy,my dear!!โค๏ธ
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Second poem is lovely and emotional.it is naturally in the present terrible situation of the world.Am i right,dear!!
You got it all right Aruna! You are a bright star in the universe! ๐๐
You are too one as same๐คmost welcome,dear!!,๐๐๐๐๐
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This is so beautiful!
Hi Cindy, this is such a lovely poem. So uplifting.
Hi Robbie,
Oh thanks so much. I’m happy you liked it and shared that with me. TY
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Love it!!๐คโค๏ธ๐
Thanks my friend! ๐
Glad you chose to write to the prompt, Cindy. You did it justice.
Oh sweet of you Lisa.. me too.., it was fun! ๐
A lovely tribute to our friendly neighborhood star, Cindy. Your talent and creativity is amazing! Thanks for blessing us with your poems.โฃ๐๐น๐
It came at a great time after your Sun lesson John. Awww that’s really kind and I’m truly honored by your words. Thank you so much!!
๐๐๐๐ Keep shining my friend!
A fitting tribute to our ๐ I like the feeling of symbiosis you create! ๐
Dear Cindy,
I just want to let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our dear Michelle Navajas is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/07/20/w3-prompt-12-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
I enjoyed reading this thank you for sharing ๐
Thank you so much!! ๐๐
Cindy,
Our beloved A. J. Wilson’s is hosting our W3 prompt this week – here’s the link!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/07/27/w3-prompt-13-weave-written-weekly/
<3
David
Great assay
THANKS so much! ๐